Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

Big lips,thick hips,booty big from potatoe chips



brown eyes,juicy thighs,hair weaves from Sally's Beauty Supplies



fried chicken eatin,kool-aid drinkin,corn bread making machine



this stereo type is just a dream of what being a black women is supposed to mean



Baby mamas,daddy drama,ghetto mentality



trash talkin,street walkin



im black but this ain't me



pimpin h0es,ice out grills,side shows just for thrills



weak raps,drug traps, dnt have enough money to buy lip chap



pants saggin down to the knees



boys hustlin to buy and sell trees



young girls with no attention



oh wait did i forget to mention?



this stereo type is just a dream of what being black is supposed to mean.



but some of this is true....



so how is it a stereo type?



are we just being labled?



we meaning us



us meaning black



are you just calling what you see



or am i imagining things?



maybe its just the black--



i mean african american people you may work with



what about the high class no aaSS got so much money



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

I could see this being recited on Def Poetry Jam.



Good job, overall.



(edit: Now that I see the additional lines, the last line now makes sense. Again, nice job.)



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

im black and i agree with this poem



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

i loved it it was great if anyone ansers meanly there lost People you cant do anything about it the poem is there to mean something dont say a negitive word its a poem



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

Im black and all of that pretty much summarizes black girls.



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

love it!



I'm hispanic.



I hate it when people think you have to look or act a certain way to fit into your race.



Do You Like My Poem?(if your racist or whatever please don't comment.)?

This is amazing. So true and so awsome.Being black I'm one of the "Differents in my school" Bad part is, all the black kids think I'm racist.AGAINST PEOPLE OF MY COLOR! WTF,right?



But thid is truly, awsomely, cool.

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